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Ms. Wolownik’s New Assistant

By EditorWriterJF on October 2, 2020April 2, 2024

Here’s my entry for the Official Kidlit #FallWritingFrenzy! Writers select one image to inspire a 200-word story. My image is below!

Ms. Wolownik’s New Assistant

Ms. Wolownik’s house looks like a rotten potato. It’s brown and white, and nobody can tell mold from paint. Its roof sags. Vines from overgrown plants spill out the windows. Cats march in and out like ants.

When Ms. Wolownik is outside, which isn’t often, her bangles clink, and her earrings tinkle like a cat bell—that jangling sends everybody running. Even Doyle.

Doyle stinks of wet lunchbox and said “girls with long legs look like frogs” when I beat him on Field Day. After school, he dared every kid to smash the pumpkins on Ms. Wolownik’s stoop. One by one, they paid him a quarter instead—the “weenie tax.”

I was last. I stepped into the yard. But while I hate losing to Doyle, Ms. Walownik’s pumpkins looked so pretty.

“Scared, princess?” Doyle taunted.

I clenched my fists. Stinky Doyle’s stupid big mouth! Suddenly, a strange zing skittered down my spine. I smelled grapefruit, and Doyle went quiet. I turned.

Doyle clutched at his head . . . which was now a giant jack-o’-lantern. 

Behind me, jewelry clinked and tinkled. “Not bad for a first spell,” said a woman’s voice. “He’ll revert in an hour, I’d guess. But I like your style.”

[END]

Thank you to @KaitlynLeann17 and @LydiaLukidis for working so hard to help writers connect with each other. This competition was great fun last time, and I can’t wait to binge-read entries today.

My past entry, The Fragility of Glass, is still available to read too!

Category: Writing
Tags: #FallWritingFrenzy, horror, Writing

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6 thoughts on “Ms. Wolownik’s New Assistant”

  1. Sara Fajardo says:
    October 2, 2020 at 2:41 pm

    Love this bit of flash fiction. Did Doyle ever have it coming!

  2. limakat says:
    October 2, 2020 at 3:17 pm

    Brilliant! I LOVE this!
    The bully gets his comeuppance, and the narrator earns a new job!
    beautiful response for that pic!

  3. Elizabeth Allie says:
    October 2, 2020 at 3:50 pm

    I fully expected Ms. Wolownik to punish Doyle. Great twist! I’m always impressed by how you can do so much with so few words!

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  5. anneuro says:
    October 26, 2020 at 1:03 am

    Such a cathartic, coming-of-magic tale! I love your deliciously spooky and evocative details like the cats marching “in and out like ants” and “the smell of grapefruit” when your narrator casts her spell. Your writing casts a magical spell, too. @AnneLipton

  6. Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez says:
    October 31, 2020 at 12:06 pm

    Ha, this was a great read for the fall writing frenzy, I chuckled at the end! Thanks for sharing!

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J. Federle is a wandering lover of ghost stories and folktales. She left Kentucky to study poetry in England. Now she lives in Peru with her husband and cow-colored dog, where she writes about her own ghosts and folks. Find her work in The Saturday Evening Post, The Threepenny Review, and the NoSleep Podcast, among other awesome publications.
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